tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post1232421101187251494..comments2023-04-26T04:20:01.525-07:00Comments on Kylie's Boudoir: The Girls Washroom Part 4Kyliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09589241946734221987noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-74900643500975195452014-11-17T22:22:47.092-08:002014-11-17T22:22:47.092-08:00Too much fun! You are so correct my Diamond in the...Too much fun! You are so correct my Diamond in the rough! Maybe sissy will be our next mission what do you think sissy? Want to play? ;) BTW Star, down girl, not all belong to you mijaAshleighXOXOnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-26632872690383371722014-11-16T12:26:19.605-08:002014-11-16T12:26:19.605-08:00LOL I don't know dollface I think we leave a l...LOL I don't know dollface I think we leave a lasting impression on anyone we come across. even the unfortunate victims still get hard-ons and jack off in the middle of the night to the thoughts of our torture :)Brandynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-29467778084486633962014-11-16T11:30:17.173-08:002014-11-16T11:30:17.173-08:00I used to do improv. After every show, we'd d...I used to do improv. After every show, we'd do a set where we just played games and took audience suggestions. The audiences loved that stuff, but it was raw and rough. After we took the scenes that worked great in improv, we'd workshop them and that would be the basis of our next show. <br /><br />This is improv. I wrote a rough draft in front of everybody in its imperfect form. I thought it was going to be too short to bother publishing on Amazon, but the 4,000 word story became an 8,000 word story. Things came along that I never planned on.<br /><br />It was going to be a simple, yet embarrassing, ambush makeover, but as the humiliation grew, I decided that some of what happened to Eric necessitated him doing more to anger the girls than to take a dare. I am currently thinking of making some changes and getting a good grammarian to proofread and putting up on Amazon. It probably won't sell much because people can get it for free, but it also won't cost me anything to publish. Kyliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589241946734221987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-11354503965407110372014-11-16T11:20:59.761-08:002014-11-16T11:20:59.761-08:00I'm very lucky in that regard. I think it dep...I'm very lucky in that regard. I think it depends on how you know them. Do you have them watching your back or did you make the mistake of crossing them? If you read chapter five, you'll see that it's really great for Emily. For Eric and Mr. Watkins, not so much.Kyliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589241946734221987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-60289193024317700662014-11-16T10:50:32.206-08:002014-11-16T10:50:32.206-08:00It's be great to know Allie, Star, Brandy, Ash...It's be great to know Allie, Star, Brandy, Ashleigh, and allMindinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-24035040013332465502014-11-15T22:03:16.876-08:002014-11-15T22:03:16.876-08:00I'm thinking its time we're introduced pr...I'm thinking its time we're introduced properly ;)*STAR*noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-32831006520368179272014-11-15T17:10:45.838-08:002014-11-15T17:10:45.838-08:00I loved the slap in the face scene!I loved the slap in the face scene!Allienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8819452083673038598.post-18509769585433834462014-11-15T16:32:42.138-08:002014-11-15T16:32:42.138-08:00Love this story!!! So fitting that the girls made ...Love this story!!! So fitting that the girls made Ariel into a mermaid and forced "her" to "swim" home!<br /><br />Two nit picks: I thought he was on his way to Spanish class (late) not biology? <br /><br />I'd prefer that we'd learned of Eric's bullying earlier. Maybe one of the girls referring to Eric bullying her little brother and another adding "yeah, and my sister!" Say, forcing the younger kids to switch clothes before their picture day the previous year?Mindinoreply@blogger.com