Welcome to the Real World, I owe you an apology. I accidentally uploaded a rough draft of the first 15% of the story or so. I didn't catch it until late last night and it took Amazon about 15 hours to fix it. If you go back to Amazon and download the story again, you won't have to pay for it and you'll be able to download the real story. I apologize for the inconvenience. I screwed that one up.